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This week for writing we were learning how to write a absrtact noun poem. First we wrote a abstract noun poem in a group. A abstract noun is something that exists but you can't touch. My group chose failure. Once we finished our group abstract poem we got to write a abstract poem in pairs. Me and my friend acein chose Pride.
Hello Kruse. You and Acein have written an amazing poem, it has a really powerful menaing behind it. You have used the 5 senses really well to explain what pride is. My favourite line is the first oe because it tells you what pride is and how qucikly it can be taken away.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Kruse.