I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Tuesday, 17 December 2019
SLJ/Day 2/Activity 2
For the Summer Learning Journey I task I completed was to make a poem of what would you feel if you first stepped on the moon. This is my poem: Behind the clouds of my memories you still shine I will never forget when I first stepped On the moon
Hi Kruse, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Hi Kruse! This Blog post was great. I think you need to work on attributing your images. Also work on just screenshotting the important part of the activity, because Your DLO that you created has a lot of space at the bottom. Blog you later! ~ Florence
Hi Kruse, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Kruse!
ReplyDeleteThis Blog post was great. I think you need to work on attributing your images. Also work on just screenshotting the important part of the activity, because Your DLO that you created has a lot of space at the bottom.
Blog you later!
~ Florence